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All In The Eyes Finale
by MudrunnerNC
Well this is the ending of my first attempt at writing an mc story. Hope you like it.Finale
We were in the middle of nowhere surrounded by trees except for the lake and the view of the mountains in the distance. Jeff and I had come up to the cabin may times with friends from school during the summer or on break. We would hike, fish, go camping, and throw the pig skin…the normal stuff. I was still upset to be taken from Damien and I was trying to devise a plan to get back to the club. When Jeff parked and shut off the car he asked if everything was ok. I shook my head. “If I release you, you’re not going to do anything stupid?” I shake my head no. As he is untying my hands he is telling me what he knows…that there is some hypnotic power to their scent and that is what has made me like this…that we can work this out together and make everything normal again. That we are best friends and he was going to stand by me and protect me. My hands released we start walking to the cabin. Jeff is mid-sentence when he hears me running away. I look back a few times to make sure I have lost him and I can’t see or hear him. As I continue down the road I am more confident that my escape was successful…then without warning I am tackled to the ground. Jeff hit me over the head with something and everything goes black.
I come to and my hands and feet are bound together. I keep begging him to let me go. “I love Damien and I want to serve him.” “Do you even hear yourself? Fuck!! Tyler this isn’t you! They have done this to you!! You can break free from this, I know you can!!” I stop talking and stair blankly at the ceiling. “Look Tyler…there are no supplies. I’m going to head to town. I’ll be back in an hour. Think about what I said.”
“Did he spot you?” No Master. I was careful to keep my distance. I have been keeping watch over the house. The other man just left. “Deliver the package and then keep watch. If our plan does not work we will send reinforcements.” Yes Master. The slave makes his way down the hill and picks the lock on the door. He makes his way through the house, careful not to make a sound in case there is anyone else in the house except for me. He comes into the bedroom and I am shocked to see one of the slaves from the club in a similar wet suit. He comes over to me and places a thick leather collar over my neck. The smell is the same as my bracelet only much stronger. My cock immediately jumps to life and the slave can’t help but stroke it a few times. He then places a silver cock ring on and I can feel the heat building up in my body. He unties my hands and feet and lets me in on the plan. He is gone before I have any time to react, retreating back to his lookout.
Jeff comes back from his shopping and starts putting things away. “Everything ok in there…can I get you something?” I do not respond. I am waiting for him to come to the room. As he enters he knows something is wrong. He can see the collar and cock ring and can’t believe it. He looks hot…no fight this…your are stronger than this!! “Tyler, take those things off. We have to get rid of them.” He can see sweat running down my naked body and his mind is starting to haze. “How did you get them?” Are you jealous? Don’t worry, they sent some for you to. I point to the nightstand where a collar and cock ring is resting. He stares at them and starts to wonder if he would look as hot as I am right now…then smacks himself across the face.
“Take it off Tyler. That’s an order.” I don’t serve you Jeff, my master is Damien. Jeff’s mind is reeling and all he can think about is getting the collar and ring off. “Take it off…please…I’m your friend…trust me.” I can’t. I’ve been order to keep it on and I can only obey. “Then I’ll take it off for you.” Jeff charged me and knocked me down to the floor. He was trying to find the opening to the collar but with no luck. I began to buck a little sliding my erect cock near his ass…if only his jeans were off. With one arm above resting my hand behind my head so that my pit stink can reach him. Jeff is still focusing on getting the collar off and does not register that I am pulling his head toward my pit. Just before his face is sunk in he jumps off the bed. He is trying to think of options and trying to fight the urge to fall into my arms. He decides that it was a waste to try and get the collar off…much better to go for the cock ring. He jumps on top of me, but this time we are in a 69 position and my cock is right by his face.
I start to rub and his crotch and then slide my hand up his shorts. His calculations were wrong. My musky scent is stronger and he is fumbling, trying to get the ring off. His hand is circling my cock and he is try to pull up. All of a sudden he feels something clasp around his neck. He tries to move but can’t. Jeff had not noticed the slave slip into the house behind him and it was too late for him to do anything. The slave whispers something into Jeff’s ear…and he starts to pick up the pace on stroking my cock. He positions his mouth just above the tip and opens wide. Sensing I am close he sucks down on my cock head. I shoot a strong load down his throat. It’s over now. No use fighting and Jeff doesn’t want to anymore.
A van arrives at the cabin and we are escorted out. The ride back to the club is uneventful. We pull up outside the garage. The Master, Cooper and Damien are waiting. I run to Damien and apologize for disappointing him. He brushes that thought away and forcefully takes possession of my mouth. He backs me into the garage and we are tongue wrestling and it is so hot. I am so close to busting a nut. The Master and Cooper take hold of Jeff and make him watch as Damien is taking me towards the bike. I stop him. Please Damien…please fuck me. I want only one thing. “Name it and it’s yours.” I want to give myself to you. Damien sits down in a chair and I start to lower slowly into his lap. Jeff’s mouth is hanging open as Damien is positioning his cock at my hole and I slowly press down. The sensation is amazing and as his cockhead passes my prostate I almost came. When my ass is in his lap, I can’t help but feel full and complete.
I start to slowly ride Damien getting used to the feeling of his hot cock up my ass. The Master and Cooper bring Jeff over and push him to his knees. His face is inches from my dripping dick and he is mesmerized. Cooper starts to pump my cock and in no time I start shooting the biggest load I have ever seen. Jeff tilts his head back and with his mouth open and tongue out catching each spurt. There is cum all over his face and when I am done he starts wiping it with his fingers, then sucking them clean.
Cooper picks Jeff up and plants a rough kiss on Jeff’s lips. Jeff is reeling with the taste of my cum still in his mouth and then the tongue attack from Cooper. The Master comes and pulls me off Damien and says it is time to complete the ritual. Damien and the Master guide me to the motorcycle. Damien comes from behind and continues the assault on my ass. The Master comes around front with his cock pointing toward my lips. I know what to do. I take his cock in my mouth sucking then pulling off and licking his shaft and taking one then the other ball in my mouth. I come back and take the full length into my mouth. The Master is leaking pre-cum that tastes 100 times stronger than Damien’s. Damien is full out pounding my ass and I am loving every minute of it. The Master grabs the back of my head and starts fucking my face, keeping in rhythm with Damien. A flood of intense feeling flows through me as I begin to feel the pleasure that Damien is getting from fucking me and the Master is feeling from fucking my face. Everyone is starting to tighten up…and then at the same time we all explode. I make sure not to miss a drop. I sucked a few more times on the Master’s cock to make sure it was clean.
Damien comes around and we start deep tongue kissing. I am exhausted and Damien half carries me to one the rooms in the club. We lay in eachothers arms. It is so hot to feel his well muscled arms around me. Every couple of hours we go at it again and again and again. We are both insatiable. I don’t know what has happened to Jeff…I am sure I’ll find out later.
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* All In The Eyes Finale
10:35 on 2008-04-01 by dougkent60
a good story but somehow dissappointing
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* All In The Eyes Finale
07:10 on 2008-04-02 by Hyphap
Good ending, though I sorta wish that the narrator had taken Jeff down on his own. Still, I can't wait to see the next story that you write!
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* All In The Eyes Finale
16:05 on 2008-04-02 by Nameless
Read the whole thing in one sitting, I liked it however it could use some cleaning up on the structure and grammar (even smut needs good punctuation). For a first on a MC story I thought you did a good job, but your biggest weakness is structure, have your Dialogue on different lines so its clearer and easier to tell one speaker from another. Sorry if this sounds harsh at all just figured for a first time writer you might want to know what to improve on.
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* All In The Eyes Finale
09:37 on 2008-04-03 by MudrunnerNC
I want the feedback and will take it into account on the next story. I hope to get more suggestions and recommendations.
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* All In The Eyes Finale
22:11 on 2008-04-03
Yeah, break up the text and also post complete stories at once instead of chapters
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* All In The Eyes Finale
14:15 on 2008-04-10 by David
I enjoyed your story, and thought it was a great first effort! Look forward to seeing more of your stories, man.
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