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Be careful what you buy...
by Blackout
This is my first story submission ever. Please excuse anything that sounds a little off, as I am actually a straight man writing this. Heh.* * * * * *
"What's this?" Adam asked himself, as he stared at his computer screen.
Adam clicked on the link and it took him to an eBay page advertising something called "TotalRelax." Adam had been searching around for some sort of electric massager for his aching muscles after a long day at work. He had tried message seats and handheld massagers, but neither were really comfortable enough for him to use.
Adam scrolled down the page and skimmed the description. Apparently, the TotalRelax massager was like a pair of long underwear with tiny massagers all over the surface of it. Included with it were relaxation oils, a pair of headphones, a pair of those awesome personal television glasses that you see in ads at the airport, and some relaxation DVDs. Adam really wasn't specifically looking for something to relax him. He merely wanted something to soothe his chronic lower back pain. But since the included relaxation tools appeared to be free, he thought "why not?"
As usual, he scanned through the seller's feedback page. The seller seemed to have an exceptionally high feedback rating. However, what was odd to Adam was that each feedback comment was exactly the same.
>> I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
>> I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
>> I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
>> I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
There also appeared to be a link to a demonstration video in the eBay page.
"Hmm..." Adam thought, "I might as well see how it works before I buy it."
Adam clicked on the link and the video began to play. The video was filmed like one of those cheesy infomercials that you see at three in the morning when nothing else is on. It looked like a fake medical health series that was airing a "special edition" to promote the product. Adam rolled his eyes, but continued to watch the video. As he watched the video, the video flickered every few seconds. "Damn flash plugin," he thought, but he continued to watch the video.
As the video ended, there was a loud beep, which started Adam. "Damn," he thought, groggily rubbing his eyes, "that video was boring." He looked over at the clock. The video had been going on for over an hour. "DAMN!" he said aloud, "I have to be at work in a couple hours!"
Without thinking, he quickly entered his credit card information and ordered a TotalRelax kit. As soon as he clicked Submit, he rushed to get ready for work.
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A few weeks later, he finally received the package. He quickly signed for it and then rushed into his bedroom. He grabbed a pair of box cutters and carefully opened the box. After opening the box and removing the packing peanuts, he was started at was in the box. "This doesn't look right," he said, pulling the suit out, "I thought it was made of cotton or something..."
The suit was black and stretchy. It was probably made with latex or Spandex or something, and it closely resembled a diving suit. The only difference is that it had circular nodes on numerous parts of the body.
Adam pulled the entire suit out of the box and held it up in front of him at the mirror in his bathroom. He raised an eyebrow.
"Well..." he said, shrugging, "at least no one will see me in it. It's not like I'm going outside in it."
Adam walked back into his bedroom with the suit and laid it flat on his bed. He picked up the box and looked inside at all the included items. The first item he pulled out looked like a tube of ointment or something.
"TotalRelax Relaxation Creme," he said, reading the tube. He turned the tube over to read the instructions.
TOTALRELAX RELAXATION CREME DIRECTIONS: APPLY LIBERALLY OVER ENTIRE BODY. FOR USE BEFORE WEARING THE TOTALRELAX MASSAGE SUIT FOR THE FIRST TIME.
"Okay..." he said, setting the tube on top of the suit. He turned back to the box and pulled out the headphones. They pretty much looked like ordinary headphones. He set them next to the tube.
The next item was the glasses and what appeared to be a handheld DVD player.
"Damn," he thought, "This was really a steal." He set the glasses and the DVD player on the bed next to the suit. He stood there for a good five minutes looking at the entire set.
"Well, I might as well try it now. I don't have to be at work for another four hours." He grabbed the instruction sheet out of the box. The instructions seemed fairly simple and straight-forward.
1. Apply Relaxation Creme over entire body.
2. Put on Massage Suit.
3. Connect headphones and television glasses to DVD player.
4. Insert Relaxation DVD I into DVD player. (NOTE: Do not put any other DVD but the first one during the first use.)
5. Lie flat and press play.
6. Relax and enjoy! ;)
"Why is there a winking smiley on there?" he thought. "Looks familiar..."
But he didn't really think much more about it. He was really eager to try on this suit.
He stripped down completely and squeezed out a good amount of the creme onto his hand. As he began to rub it all over his body, he began to notice a pleasant, warm, tingly feeling arise over his entire body. The tingly feeling soon spread to every part of his body: his head, his toes, his arms and legs, his chest and stomach, his back and ass, and even his cock and balls. "Damn," he said, as his cock slowly grew erect from the sensation, "I could almost get off on this creme."
He finished rubbing the creme on his body and picked up the suit. The creme really made it easier to slip the suit onto his body. As soon as he got the suit on, he walked up to a mirror to check it out.
"Wow," he said, surprised, "I look fucking hot in this suit!"
With a seemingly new sense of energy, he ran to his bed and hopped back first onto it, laying completely flat. He grabbed the DVD player and put the first DVD in it.
"Oh shit," he realized, "batteries." He fumbled for the battery compartment and when he opened it, to his surprise, it already had batteries in it. "Sweet!"
He grabbed the headphones and the glasses and connected them to the DVD player and put them on his head. He laid flat and pressed play.
The video on the DVD looked as though it was filmed the same way as the video on the eBay website. It looked like a cheesy infomercial. "Surely this is just the introduction," he thought.
A man in a business suit appeared on the screen. "Thank you for purchasing the TotalRelax Full Body Massage and Relaxation kit! If you are watching this introduction video, then we can assume you have already put on the relaxation creme and the message suit, and that you have the headphones and glasses connected to the personal DVD player."
"Let us take a few moments to introduce you to how the TotalRelax system works. First and most importantly of all is the message suit. Unlike message pads and seats, which only message the area directly contacting them, the TotalRelax message suit is in constant contact with every part of the body, providing simultaneous relaxing stimulation to every muscle of the body!
"You may have noticed that there isn't an on/off switch on the TotalRelax suit. That is because the suit is wirelessly controlled by the personal DVD player. As the DVD plays, the DVD player activates different parts of the suit to provide a thorough and precise full body massage.
"Each node on the TotalRelax message suit is not only equipped with tiny electric shock transmitters to enhance the relaxation sensation that comes with the vibrating action of the nodes. Let us demonstrate."
Just then Adam felt a shock from every node at once. "Fuck!" Adam screamed, but as he tried to get up, he found that he couldn't move.
"The simultaneous full body shock you have just received has totally, but temporarily paralyzed your entire body. This is crucial for the personality reprogrammer to operate correctly."
Wait. What?!? Adam struggled to get up and rip the suit off, but he found that no matter how much he tried to move, it became even more difficult to do.
"Lay back and relax as the personality reprogrammer slowly reprograms your body and mind to fulfill the wish of your new master. After the completion of the first DVD, you will no longer be your current self, but a totally submissive, homosexual sexual toy for the user who sold you this product."
"Oh my God," Adam screamed, but only in his head, as his face was paralyzed as well, "What the fuck have I bought?"
"That's right..." said the man in the suit, but more slowly, "Relax....... let the soothing sounds and music lull you into a highly responsive trance........"
His voice melted into a low hum as the video faded to black. The screen remained black for a few seconds. Adam tried to close his eyes, but found that his eyes were glued wide open. Suddenly a burst of bright colorful spirals flooded the screen. At that moment, Adam stopped trying to close his eyes. In fact, he stopped thinking about trying to close his eyes. He became totally lost in the dancing lights.
Adam layed there, unresponsive for a few minutes, his mind completely drowning in the sound of the hum and the bright colorful light flooding his sight.
"Step 1: Identity Deletion" said the man from the introduction, "You cannot truely begin to serve your master until every trace of your current self is forgotten completely. This program will help you erase every memory, experience, love, hate, and inhibition you have stored in your mind and will leave you an empty shell for the next part of the program to mold into a new personality."
As soon as he finished speaking, every vibrating message node turned on full blast, completely stimulating every part of Adam's body, with extra focus on his cock and balls. Adam moaned loudly as waves of pleasure washed over his body. His mind was still lost in the dancing lights but his body was alive with sexual energy.
"Now, what I need you to do is focus everything that defines your personality and being into the sexual pleasure you are currently experiencing. When given the cue, you will begin masturbating. When you are about to cum, you will focus every memory, experience, love, hate, and inhibition into your cock and as you cum, you will allow all of that to flow out, leaving your mind completely empty for the next program. Begin masturbating now."
Adam felt a shock in his arms, allowing them to move again. He mechanically reached down and began stroking his cock through the suit. With each stroke, the vibrations in his genital area grew more and more intense, until finally he was almost at orgasm. At that point, he stroked his cock faster and faster until he finally released. With each pump of his cock, and each stream of cum shooting out of it, he lost more and more of his memories and personality. As soon as he finished, he laid his arms to his sides and sighed.
"Step 1: Complete."
"Beginning Step 2: Identity Replacement"
The dancing lights that Adam had become so hopelessly lost in faded away and soon a collection of photographs and instructions flashed rapidly on the screen. Most of the photographs showed naked males in various gay sexual acts, such as sucking cock and getting fucked. Adam recieved another shock in his arm and like a robot, he mechanically stuck his index finger up his ass and began messaging his prostate. The nodes in his genital area continued to stimulate his cock and balls rapidly as well as the fingertip of the finger up his ass.
As though he were a computer, he began to say "Processing..." over and over in a low monotone voice. The photographs and instructions grew faster and faster as did Adam's mantra and prostate stimulation. Suddenly, Adam erupted a second time and the screen went blank.
He sighed again, allowing his arm to rest again to his side. "Processing complete," he said, in monotone.
"Step 2: Complete."
"Beginning Step 3: Installing Personalized Instructions from Master User"
The same process from Step 2 ran its course, but instead of photographs of gay sex, a video played of his new master.
"Hello, Adam. My name is Jared, but you will call me Master upon meeting me. What I want you to do is simple. You have already sent me your address and phone number with your payment. I will call you when I arrive. Do not answer the telephone. When you see my name on the Caller ID, log onto your eBay account and leave the feedback comment you were instructed to give during Step II and then wait on your bed. Do not leave the house and stay in your bedroom." With that final instruction, Jared snapped his fingers and Adam blacked out.
Adam woke later to his phone ringing. Adam stood up and walked over to the phone. The Caller ID said Jared. As instructed, Adam walked over to his computer, logged onto eBay and proceeded to the TotalRelax page.
>> I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
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* Be careful what you buy...
08:53 on 2008-08-08
For a first time submitter this was first rate. Great job my friend!
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* Be careful what you buy...
10:20 on 2008-08-08
MORE MORE MORE Great job
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* Be careful what you buy...
10:22 on 2008-08-08
It was good. Would have liked more descriptions of the processing. Hope you might write a sequel so we know what happens!
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* Be careful what you buy...
10:48 on 2008-08-08
good read.....hope you have more up your sleeve for us.
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* Be careful what you buy...
11:23 on 2008-08-08 by Kenneth
Great
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* Be careful what you buy...
14:22 on 2008-08-08
Not bad! Adding more description and detail of the battle between his mind and the programming in addition to more graphic detail of the images of sex would have made it better!
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* Be careful what you buy...
20:01 on 2008-08-08
I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
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* Be careful what you buy...
20:20 on 2008-08-08
More adventures please. How'bout a continuation? Personallity reprogramming to latex subs, just lovely. Keep it up. Bluemax
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* Be careful what you buy...
22:28 on 2008-08-08
Well done! Very stimulating. ;)
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* Be careful what you buy...
02:09 on 2008-08-09 by Blackout
1. First of all, wow. I wasn't expecting so many responses. 2. In response to adding detail of the sex, I have to say it's a little hard to do since I'm straight. 3. In response to the latex sub comment, I have to say he wasn't necessarily going to stay in the suit. 4. And finally, I am still surprised no one has commented on me being straight.
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* Be careful what you buy...
02:50 on 2008-08-09 by Lars
that story did'nt make me come, but it was a damn good story
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* Be careful what you buy...
04:25 on 2008-08-09
cool story... be careful about massage and message....
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* Be careful what you buy...
04:29 on 2008-08-09 by MalSkin
Enjoyed it Very Much...thanks I look forward to more from you
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* Be careful what you buy...
05:26 on 2008-08-09
very good, I cam bigtime. If you could use some body modification next time like some muscle development or loss of body hair or even growing some body hair for the Bear lovers out there. hehe Keep it cumming.
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* Be careful what you buy...
07:13 on 2008-08-09 by DR2K
1. First let me say you story showed great potential as shown by the responses. 2. As to adding detail of the sex, well being straight makes it more difficult. But I find that reading some of the descriptions on this site and a bit of research on the net can help fill in the gaps. 3.And finally, you shouldn’t be surprised that no one has commented on your being straight and writing M4M mind control stories. There are more straight men writing them than you think! Myself included! After all the stories are about loss of control more than sex.
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* Be careful what you buy...
10:56 on 2008-08-09 by Krissiboi
Awesome story! Would love to see more detail about how Adam changes and the humiliation he suffers at work, at the, gym, etc. Very hot to think about him changing his mannerisms, grooming, shopping, dressing, reading material, etc. Can't wait to read more!
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* Be careful what you buy...
10:25 on 2008-08-10 by dougkent60
can't leave a long comment on how good this is as I need to log on to Ebay immediately
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16:28 on 2008-08-10 by Hyphap
Very nice first effort! I agree with those wanting more detail--it could stand to go a little slower and enjoy the process. Still, a great story, and I'm excited to see more. And clearly your being straight didn't get in the way of your writing a good gay story--hope to see more from you? And out of curiosity, why did you want to write a gay story? (P. S. DR2K, we want to see another story from you soon!)
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18:33 on 2008-08-10
@Hyphap: It's not so much about writing a gay story. It's about writing a story about loss of control. I think it's much more enjoyable to read about a male losing control of himself than a woman losing control. It's partly because males tend to think of themselves as the stronger gender. Therefore it's harder to bring them down and make them lose themselves, and thus more enjoyable to write and read about.
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18:35 on 2008-08-10 by Blackout
@Hyphap: It's not so much about writing a gay story. It's about writing a story about loss of control. I think it's much more enjoyable to read about a male losing control of himself than a woman losing control. It's partly because males tend to think of themselves as the stronger gender. Therefore it's harder to bring them down and make them lose themselves, and thus more enjoyable to write and read about.
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21:36 on 2008-08-10 by Ants
very hot, cant wait for more
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06:57 on 2008-08-11 by Hyphap
Blackout--Thanks for talking to me about why you write. I'm glad that you are writing what you are! What I would love to ssee in the next story is a little bit about how it feels to lose control. How bizarre must it be to feel yourmind slip, feel yourself getting aroused at something you used to hate, feeling your personality be erased and replaced. More description of that would make your stories even better.
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16:03 on 2008-08-12
I enjoyed this story very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
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04:52 on 2008-08-13
Haha great comments guys
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14:38 on 2008-08-18
Did he ever get to work that day??!!!!!
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17:29 on 2008-09-04 by subject2pressure
Really good! Processing complete. Ready for step 3. ;)
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00:16 on 2009-06-22
Soooo Sooooo excellent.
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03:35 on 2011-08-21
>> I enjoyed this product very much. I would highly recommend it to a friend. ;)
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* Be careful what you buy...
01:02 on 2011-10-25 by Kisar
sooooo hot
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