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Supernatural Revenge Squad part two
by Kjell Eric Royer (and wiki )
Thank you to eveyone who helped to edit this (this is the fifth revision)From part one:
My name is Hawthorn Rigby the 4th, and I am head of the Supernatural Revenge Squad. Our rules are quite simple, if the supernatural was used to hurt someone else, then we can take Revenge for the victims. You have already had warnings! Karma, ‘the golden rule', "what goes around..." the rule of three fold return.
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Five minutes later Master Nate, Lee, and 'Rigs' were sitting in the intake selection room, while across town with the contract signed and Garth bringing the IO spiked drinks...
End part one.
Garth watched both men down their Guinness. In his mind he was doing a jig to the mantra beat of 'No more Mark, the job is mine!', ‘no more Mark, the job is mine!'
Garth watched as Mark and his friend in business started to take on a glossy eyed look, all thoughts gone from their mind. Garth made the business friend drive safely to his own house, where he would go to bed, and forget that he had seen Mark this night.
Then Garth brought Mark to the door Master's Pleasure, explaining that he was bringing a trainee slave. The door slave brought out his walkie-talkie, "Master Nate, you are requested at the Slave entry."
"I understand, I'll be bringing a friend," said Master Nate.
In less than a thrice, Master Nate and 'Rigs' were standing at the slave entry, looking for all the world like twins.
"I am Master Nate, what do you want?" Master Nate questioned Garth looking straight at him.
"I want to sell a trainee slave," stated Garth rather boldly, pointing to Mark.
"Look at him, he has to be 40 if he's a day, he can't have more than ten good years left in him and all the things that he will have to unlearn, I bet he even has family in this town, I'll give you $1 for him," said Rigs
"It took a lot of effort to get him here $1000," Demanded Garth
"Deal," said Master Nate, pulling out ten hundred dollar bills, and ushering Mark into the intake room of Master's Pleasure.
"That was a lot to pay for him," said Hawthorn, once they were back in Master's Pleasure. "Yeah, but I will get the money back, and I didn't want to haggle, time is money too." replied Master Nate.
After buying Mark, the three of them walked back to the slave intake room, Lee's eye's gleamed at the sight of Mark, for Lee, it was love at first sight.
Master Nate leaned into Mark, "Listen to the men in this room, they are slaves, and you might be one too!"
Everyone form a line, the fifteen men did with Harry and Dalton at the end.
"Alright do any of you know why you are here?" asked Master Nate.
"My Master wanted to sell me for profit," or something of that ilk was said by most. One said "My Master lost me in a poker match."
The next man was the last man before Harry and Dalton said, "I lost my slave in a poker game, and he was the last thing I owned on earth, so I sold myself as well." Everyone's heart broke at that.
Harry said, "That was a stroke of bad luck."
Hawthorn leaned over to Master Nate and said, "Keep those guys together- I have had a strange feeling when they said that."
Harry said, "I don't know"
Dalton said, "You fucking prick, Harry! I went back to Sandy the next day, I told her I loved the way that we had sex, yesterday. She hit me and said you RAPED me! You told me that she wanted to have sex with both of us! You LIED to me; you put buradunga, or some other date rape drug! I am here for whatever punishment that fate deems fit."
"Gentlemen, or should I say, Slaves and slaves to be, we are going to the next room, where we will test your capacity for being a slave," said Master Nate," and lets go 3 at a time.
Master Nate took the first three men into the next room, and sat each man in a chair, and strapped them into a vr helmet. He pulled a lever, and the room rotated, presenting a new copy of the room. There are multiple copies of the room that sped up the induction process.
As the new slaves exited the room, each one was painted with a number 1-13. The poker slave and his former master were marked as 14a and 14b respectively. In the control room Buttboy was reviewing the test results he gave Harry and two others- Mark and the slave 14b were given a red sash to wear, the rest were given either a yellow or a green sash.
"Why are they given different color sashes?" asked Lee.
"They indicate the desire of the slave, a green sash would do anything to/ for his master, technically we can't sell them-If his master were to order it, he would kill himself, he will do whatever he is told. The yellow sashed slaves will be sold and will only do what is legal and ethical to do, no master will ever get him to break the law! Red sashes are for those who are not by nature, or previous training, a slave.
"Now, we must train these slaves, Lee, I expect to see you visit Mark every day, when the time is right we will have a slave auction, for Mark it will be a silent auction, and you will have the right of last overbid." stated Master Nate.
Over the course of one month, Mark was given the responsibility of turning the men into slaves. In the VR units, the men were put through basic military training, as their minds were scrubbing latrines, barracks and buildings, and running decathlons, obstacle courses and performing various exercises, their asses and mouths were receiving dildo treatments, which was made possible via the VR chair, and at optimal times, they were milked. While most of the men were responsible for orders that came from Mark, Mark was made to order the men about.
He had to remind Harry and Dalton why they were there, to which Dalton always replied, "Thank you, SIR, This SLIME will remember that has performed rape and accepts his punishment, he is sorry!" At first Harry tried to say something like, "I DIDN'T do it!" but was quick to stop that when he kept getting the entire group the extra ten mile marching hikes!
When the month outside the VR unit was over, the slaves and Master Mark had endured 16 months of sex training and slave training, and from time to time Lee had been there reinforcing the fact that Lee loved his Master-Daddy, and over that 16 months, it became a two way street.
Master Nate asked each slave in turn, "Who are you?"
Each one would reply, "Sir, I am SLAVE number one (or their proper number), How can I be of service?"
Master Nate would say to each in turn, "Kill, yourself!"
Each slave would say, "Sir, I can't be ordered to do that, that is destruction of your property, and THAT is not right."
Master Nate turned to Master Mark, "You have trained your flock well."
"Thank you, sir, It was a big responsibility, but on their own they all have failed in life, I wish that I could keep many of them, but, I know that they are going to a better home than I could provide for most of them, I kind of like Dalton, even though he is a rapist," stated Master Mark, stating the last part just to hear..."SIRS, this Filth and Slime remembers that he is a rapist and accepts his punishment, he CAN NOT be sorrier," come from both Harry and Dalton.
"Well done, indeed! Mark, tomorrow there is going to be a slave auction, and due to a technical snafu, you have to be sold as a slave. We have arranged that Lee has the right to last overbid, meaning that he can cut the bid for you way short, then you will be his 'slave', but he is buying you to be his Master/Daddy/Lover/Whatever. You will work out the details between the two of you; I just need you to know the details upfront." Said Master Nate.
"I am glad that I wasn't programmed like the other slaves, I do remember Garth ordering me to come here, and be a slave, but I don't know why I agreed to it, Oh, Shit, my son! What in the hell am I going to say to him?"
"That you were away at business for a month, it's what I've told him," said Hawthorn 'Rigs' Rigsby the 4th.
"And he will believe that?" Mark asked. "Yes," said Rigs," he will accept the explanation, the fact that you are now a Master, he will also accept Lee as a brother."
Meanwhile across town at Comp-Am Corp We check in with Garth...
Garth was staring at a pile of files in his in box wondering if the stress was really worth the effort that he had put into the getting the promotion. Five people that he was to manage had quit, retired, or went on leave when he got the promotion. Everyone knew that the position at the company that Garth got should have gone to Mark; everyone whispered that Garth killed Mark and blackmailed the boss into giving him the job. No one respected Garth, not even the clients!
Lee was an 18 year old multi-millionaire, with controlling interest in 3 very profitable businesses, the fact that he was in an adult s/m bar did not faze anyone, as 'Rigs' glamor was covering him too at this moment.
"What is my bid for this older gentleman?"
"$500!" said a man across the room
"$600!" said Lee
"$1000!" said the other man
"$1250!" said Lee
"Are there any other bids?" asked Master Nate, looking around the crowded room, Master Nate guessed that people just weren't Interested in Mark
"Going once, Going twice, SOLD to the young man in the yellow shirt!"
"We can leave now," said Hawthorn.
"No, not yet," said Mark.
Hawthorn was surprised when Lee bought Dalton and the paired lot 14a and 14b having paid a total price of $47,950 for the four of them, having used the final overbid on 14a and b.
"What were your birth names? I won't keep calling you 14a and 14b," said Mark.
"I am John Bergman, SIR!" said 14b.
"I was Jason Tyler, SIR!" said the former 14a.
"Let's go to my house," said Lee, "we can go to your home tomorrow Daddy!"
"You betcha, love."
Hawthorn went back to his place, Tyler, Bergman, something about those names stood out in his mind! He knew that he'd come across those names before, but where? Well he'd have to think about that maybe tomorrow!
End part two Kjell Eric Royer (and wiki )
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* Supernatural Revenge Squad part two
01:27 on 2010-08-28
Pretty terrible.
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* Supernatural Revenge Squad part two
13:43 on 2010-08-28 by Person
Awful.
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* Supernatural Revenge Squad part two
02:16 on 2010-08-30
You can't win if you don't try, and you can't REALLY complain, because you were offered a chance to edit it
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* Supernatural Revenge Squad part two
23:30 on 2010-09-10
This "story" gets more irratic each time it is supposedly modified.
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